Is this your skate board? Your poem seems to really explain you personally, good job.
nice poem. really showed your personality. xD
I agree with what they said. THis really fits you. I like that you could incorperate your towns feelings toward your lifestyle into it.
Good job. This poem expressed who you are and it was to the point!
I liked it. Small towns are always nice to grow up in. Even if you can't stand them by the time you get older.
What an adventurous and expressive lifestyle and background you have. An always interesting and upbeat life, I'm sure!
The part about "wounds that didn't heal" is wonderful. The tone is serious, yet light. Your use of smaller sentences causes a rush, and makes it exciting to read.
The part about your father is really good, most of my family was in the military. This poem really portrays who you are. Great job
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Is this your skate board? Your poem seems to really explain you personally, good job.
nice poem. really showed your personality. xD
I agree with what they said. THis really fits you. I like that you could incorperate your towns feelings toward your lifestyle into it.
Good job. This poem expressed who you are and it was to the point!
I liked it. Small towns are always nice to grow up in. Even if you can't stand them by the time you get older.
What an adventurous and expressive lifestyle and background you have. An always interesting and upbeat life, I'm sure!
The part about "wounds that didn't heal" is wonderful. The tone is serious, yet light. Your use of smaller sentences causes a rush, and makes it exciting to read.
The part about your father is really good, most of my family was in the military. This poem really portrays who you are. Great job
The part about your father is really good, most of my family was in the military. This poem really portrays who you are. Great job
The part about your father is really good, most of my family was in the military. This poem really portrays who you are. Great job
The part about your father is really good, most of my family was in the military. This poem really portrays who you are. Great job
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