I liked your poem. I couldnt read the fisrt part it was cut off but i liked the rest. I was also very into basketball as well so I liked that part about you.
"...hidden argument" is an interesting line. It creates a sense of wonder, which is something I like about poetry. You seem very connected with life, and experiencing the most that you can.
It sounds like you are very close to your family, something that I hold dearly too. Sports was and is a big part of my life which seems to be the case with you
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I liked your poem. I couldnt read the fisrt part it was cut off but i liked the rest. I was also very into basketball as well so I liked that part about you.
the first part was cut off. but the poem is good. nice to have a happy family.
Your family sounds so sweet! I loved the poem
I wish I was into sports like you are and are so dedicated to them and your family
"I love you to the moon and back"! My mother used to say that to me every night. What a wonderfully happy poem.
"...hidden argument" is an interesting line. It creates a sense of wonder, which is something I like about poetry. You seem very connected with life, and experiencing the most that you can.
It sounds like you are very close to your family, something that I hold dearly too. Sports was and is a big part of my life which seems to be the case with you
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